Blog Post #2- Final Shoe Drawing
One problem that I struggled with was creating different values throughout my drawing. When I first started adding details I noticed that my shoe felt monotonous in color. The peer critiquing helped me the most with this problem because I could easily add in darker and lighter charcoal however, when we did the critiquing I was able to hear new perspectives on how I could use the different charcoals to tie in my project.
I challenged myself by using charcoal. This was a new material for me. Using charcoal was a great experience for me because when I look back at the art I have done, I notice a similarity with the art. The art I did was usually tempera or acrylic paint. By using charcoal I opened up a new pathway for my art. I will now be able to use it on my own and practice to get better.
In my final shoe project, I can identify areas that need improvement and also areas that I am happy with. One thing I would do differently next time would be to spend more time sighting before I started to add details. I would do this because when I hung up my drawing on the wall and took a step back, I realized that the proportions were off. An aspect that I was proud of was the very front of the shoe. I am happy with that part because I captured shadow and light in it. That made the shoe look more realistic like it was curving.
One thing I wish I could change would be the angle. I am happy with the original angle that I chose but as I moved onto the laces, I noticed that I slightly changed the angle. The angle I started with was a side view but as i did the laces it looked more like a top view.
One major aspect that I learned that will help me in the future is the sighting technique. I have struggled with proportions even at the beginning of art ex. when we worked on looking at a drawing and recreating it. After looking back at my final drawing I saw that I rushed the sighting. This mistake helped me learn to take time on this step. This technique is probably going to be the most useful in my art career.
I wish I had more time to help demo how to use the charcoal. It's so hard to help each student as much as I want with 30 of you! I think for having to work independently you tackled it nicely.
ReplyDeleteYou've made some good observations about your artwork and your habits that I think will really help you in your next drawing. Way to go!